sweet as sugar

Where could they be? It was a dark,misty night in Lion Square, not a single sound could be heard other than the the occasional birds singing and animals rustling. Lion Square was mainly where the rich people lived,the houses were extremly expensive with several floors. Its ornate gas lamps lit the town,focusing on the beautiful, marble lion fountain in the center. But tonight was different... lurking in the shadows were mysterious creatures also known as Goblin-Wolf Raiders.They slowly edged towards where Mrs. Schmidt (the bakers wife) and her three children: Katrin,Rudi and Bobby lived. The town was silent but they smashed through the back door never-the-less.A group of 15 rushed upstairs to find Katrin and Rudi's bedrooms empty and then headed for Bobby and his mother's. They found them fast asleep and kidnapped them,taking them far away towards the World's Edge Montains with the rest of their captives. When Katrin and Rudi returned at 10 o'clock after helping Sidney Mitchell (the newspaper seller) unload the papers from his van. "Mum,mum are you home?" Rudi shouted up the stairs. "shh the're probably in bed,what was you thinking shouting your head off at 10 at night when people are asleep!" Katrin hissed. Her long,silky black hair swished this way and that as she ran up the stairs. Her bright,cyrstal blue eyes twinkled in the dark as she peaked into Bobby's room to find an empty bed. "Maybe he had a nightmare and went in with mum" she thought to herself before finding mum and dads bed empty. "The're gone,their beds are empty,where would they be at this time of night?" Katrin panicked to Rudi. "How am I supossed to know?" Rudi replied. Rudi slowly walked towards the front door,"Hey Katrin, come look at these footprints!" He shouted. "They defiently don't belong to mum or Bobby... I think they are Goblin-Wolf Raider's,yes they are!" Katrin realised. "That means the've probably been taken to the World's Edge Mountain's,we've got to find them!" Katrin said. So they set off to the World's Edge Mountains,in the hope of finding their family. They noisily truged through the muddy field in their old wellie boots. Katrin struggled as she held her knee lenght blue dress which tied across her chest out of the way. "Are we there yet?" Rudi moaned."We've got ages left!" came his reply. It seemed like they had been going for ages as they had already ran trough woods and towns on the search. Far in the distance Katrin could see a town, it was a noisy town with karts and horses driving along busy roads;nothing like lion Square which was always quiet and peaceful."Come on Katrin!" Rudi rushed foward heading to the town. They both ran to the town. As the walked along the road they saw a perquliar man whereing a skull mask oviously to hide his identity,black thigh high leather boots with blue trousers and a skull embroidered top. "He looks scary!" Rudi whispered into Katrin's ear. Suddenly,in the corner of his eye Rudi saw the man draw a sharp knife out of his belt. Rudi's big royal blue eyes stared in horror."Hold my hand,Rudi" Katrin said ater seeing the man too. "No,I don't need my sister holding my hand,it's embarrising!" Rudi replied."just do it, don't want to lose you" Katrin whisperd stearnly. They walked through the crowds of people,staying far away from the strange man. "Katrin... I'm hungry" Rudi whined. "We'll get some bread from this shop" Katrin said as she stepped into the open door. On the frontpage of the newspaper Rudi saw the same man;the headline shot a shiver of fear down his back "The Assassin strikes again... claming more victims everyday" His face went pale. "Katrin...look at this" Rudi squeaked as Katrin handed the jolly man at the till £1.35. The man saw Rudi's ghost white face staring at the paper and realised what was wrong."Hey young man,what's wrong nothin' to worry about 'ere we ain't seen 'im for quite some time" the shopkeeper said. "But weee hhhave jjust ddown that road" Rudi shivered in fear. "You 'aven't I mean you couldn't... thanks a lot mate I'll call the cops now,where was it you saw 'im down the alley,yes of course, cheeryo!" "Katrin can we go now" Rudi asked. "Yes, look a trains come in at the staiton by the looks of things it will take us only a few miles away from the mountains... Don't worry about it" Katrin said. So they quickly ran to the station,jumping on the train just in time. It was a long journey but the got there in the end."Look there's the mountains!" Katrin shouted. They took their time wondering through the greenmeadows and yellow fields. When they got to the mountain they found a small cave surrounded by Gobin-Wolf Raiders eating over a campire.It was in the middle of the woods and they could here the sound of voices coming from the cave. Katrin and Rudi both drew their knives and walked into the den. They punche dand kicked their way through the Goblins... leaving their knives for the last... The King. His claws scratched across Katrin's shoulder causing her to fight with only one arm.He charged at Rudi but Rudi jumped back to his feet sliding his knife towards the monsters leg. The goblin fell down in pain making him defence less. Katrin slid her knife through his chest killing him instantly. Rudi yanked open the door to the cave to find Bobby,and their mum save along with many other villagers.They caught the train back home and everyone in Lion Square never even mentioe about the Goblin's again! The End! Read more stories by sweet as sugar Comments Comment by Tootycutie brilliant story i want to see some more! 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